Howdy. Really enjoying your post-game interpretation and continuity of events. Looking forward to your updating and the possible reunion of Shep and Blue.
Just wanted to point out the niggling anatomical fail on this page. It doesn't detract from the overall art style or the intended emotional impact but in frame three Shepard's left arm is... dislocated. Her elbow joint, or more likely, shoulder joint needs to be taken into consideration for a more accurate portrayal of a tender caress... unless Cerberus'alterations went as far as Go-Go Gadget arms.
I would suggest perhaps re-aligning the errant limb. Or relocating it inside of Liara's hold, as in the previous page Shepard was touching Liara first, and to me it seems more logical that Liara's arm would have moved to an outer position in their hold than an inner as she was the last to act.
Anywho, just a minor niggle I put way to much thought into, but the more I look at it the more it stands out, and nobody else has seemed to notice, or at least comment.
Looking forward to your updates and the conclusion of your tale (with all anatomy intact, I hope!).
Yeah, it didn't look so off when I was drawing it, but then I cut it to fit, and now it does look really weird, but I probably wont be going back to fix it at this point. Maybe way down the line if I ever actually finish the comic, I will go back and fix things. (There's a lot of little things scattered about that bother me) Thanks for the feed back though.
Wow, while reading this my mind was subconsciously playing the romance song. The sad piano one. That's how good you got the emotions. The art direction isn't half bad either(or any bad for that matter) What can I say, you nailed it. Can't help but want more.